Hey Joren,
Thanks for the kind words. I feel very encouraged reading your response, and I am glad that it moved you in such a way. I’m happy because I worked pretty hard to finish this, and it’s nice to see that people like you are enjoying this piece. I do think it can definitely be a much better piece with some polishing and editing — when I finished it I was exhausted and didn’t want to do anything else but publish and sleep haha. I will have to revisit this and look over my mistakes.
Thanks again for reading and sharing your thoughts Joren.